05-23-2015, 11:38 PM
(05-23-2015, 11:37 PM)AustinLB90 Wrote:(05-23-2015, 11:36 PM)Segolia Wrote: //As primarily a spectator, I think the major problem here is totally random things being introduced with no prior explanation or relation to anything. There's some alright extended plots here which I can actually follow because they are introduced gradually and are internally consistent, but there is also a lot of *waves hand* <Huge problem from nowhere> *waves again* <huge problem is magically gone because I said so> which just trivialises the nature of whatever you were trying to introduce.
//yes but getting rid of magic isn't going to fix it, retconning the stupid things like the angels and the elementals will.
// And retconning the elementals brings back..
// GUESS WHO!
// OH! ITS CLONE 9!
// AND HE HAS FUCKING MAGIC!
// YAAAAY!
Bow down, overdweller.