08-24-2015, 02:52 PM
I'm trying to be. Honestly, I just get overexcited and trip over myself in a rush to explain things. I am moderately frustrated that most people keep misinterpreting my points, but that can always be edited later. I was actually hoping Ryu would have been comatose for longer, as I had been trying end endlessly redoing critique sheets without trying to sound like my usual abrasive self. I've edited in parts of the critique that I have cleared to an extent in the reply post to Ryu, but it should be done tomorrow at least.
Edit: using the term "it's just a fictional creation" is a pretty big fallacy. Regardless, if the matter is real or not is irrelevant. Hell, I was told that up until recently, Ryu wasn't even aware he had his sugar conversion backwards. A large portion of my rant is simply a guide as to what other issues the concept has, especially with the tone it is trying to carry. As much as I would love to endlessly fawn over the concept with the rest of you, I have never seen ANY constructive criticism ever applied to the Avali. As much as I wish not to, considering I enjoy lurking more often, I am going to play the devil's advocate and simply get all of the issues out of the way. I only have two real criticisms: the weapons' art, and the fact Ryu literally named his race after apples.
Edit: using the term "it's just a fictional creation" is a pretty big fallacy. Regardless, if the matter is real or not is irrelevant. Hell, I was told that up until recently, Ryu wasn't even aware he had his sugar conversion backwards. A large portion of my rant is simply a guide as to what other issues the concept has, especially with the tone it is trying to carry. As much as I would love to endlessly fawn over the concept with the rest of you, I have never seen ANY constructive criticism ever applied to the Avali. As much as I wish not to, considering I enjoy lurking more often, I am going to play the devil's advocate and simply get all of the issues out of the way. I only have two real criticisms: the weapons' art, and the fact Ryu literally named his race after apples.
Harshest critic of the Avali. An idea that never changes is a truly dead one.