09-04-2015, 12:03 AM
To be honest, I didn't expect anyone else to care. You aren't the one my criticism is meant for, but I will gladly defend any attempts to poke holes in it. The only way to make authors take another look at their work is to be frank and honest, to show what they can work on, even if no one else notices.
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(09-03-2015, 11:56 PM)Segolia Wrote:(09-03-2015, 11:47 PM)SharpTeeth Wrote: With the Avali being so overly convulted because its trying to be so hard-scifi it needs to have more handwaved away than to simply try to explain everything away.That's the problem, they're not trying to be hard sci fi.
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Harshest critic of the Avali. An idea that never changes is a truly dead one.