09-04-2015, 12:12 AM
(09-04-2015, 12:03 AM)SharpTeeth Wrote: To be honest, I didn't expect anyone else to care. You aren't the one my criticism is meant for, but I will gladly defend any attempts to poke holes in it. The only way to make authors take another look at their work is to be frank and honest, to show what they can work on, even if no one else notices.The part where this mentality falls short is: i can be fairly certain ryu doesnt care much himself either > ^> Your basically
(09-03-2015, 11:56 PM)Segolia Wrote: That's the problem, they're not trying to be hard sci fi.
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throwing bones at a color printer and asking it to dance you a showtune.
I can really understand if you see flaws in the lore and would like to see them fixed?...
But Lets be real here if ryu wanted the criticism you wouldn't of had to chase him down to the fourms
Of course i can speak all to well for him but from what i know he doesn't care what you have to say and still nobody else does
Avali wont be hard sci-fi lore with fleshier story than a ham sandwich. Its just a fun little race for starbound that caught on, thats it.