09-04-2015, 12:30 AM
"I am pretty sure that it's not, really just world-building from what I know."
"This was a deliberate decision since the intention was to drill down into potential uses and pitfalls of tommorow's technology (Networking, robotics, augmentation)."
There we go. Now it might be understandable I seemingly might be exaggerating the point, but since he has specified a specific purpose to the story, I wanted to demonstrate how that might be improved.
"This was a deliberate decision since the intention was to drill down into potential uses and pitfalls of tommorow's technology (Networking, robotics, augmentation)."
There we go. Now it might be understandable I seemingly might be exaggerating the point, but since he has specified a specific purpose to the story, I wanted to demonstrate how that might be improved.
Harshest critic of the Avali. An idea that never changes is a truly dead one.