10-31-2015, 12:14 AM
(10-31-2015, 12:12 AM)UnamusedAvali Wrote:(10-31-2015, 12:05 AM)Flarezerker Wrote: Tanks. Rough draft for a hub world in the RP. I'd love some critique or suggestions, if you have any. Sorry that it kinda sucks, not very good at writing.
But uhhh, I'm not to sure on the magic... Magic... meh others will probably enjoy it, I'm just not too keen on the ideas behind magic( BURN THE WITCH ) but overall it's pretty good...
Thanks. Only reasons I included magic was because 1. portals 2. its on the edge of reality, and 3. people like magic. That, and I just really like the idea of a steampunk-esque mage. I dont know why, but I do. DONT JUDGE ME!!! *cries in corner*
New page for Slightly Damned tomorrow. I'm legit excited for the first time in years. I cant believe this,