03-18-2016, 06:23 PM
(03-18-2016, 06:22 PM)Umbra Wrote:Well I already said that I know exactly where I'm going wrong on the last page, that doesn't really improve the writing immediately though.(03-18-2016, 06:06 PM)Surge Wrote: I hope it turns out well, almost certainly better than my writing.
Being self-depreciative doesn't help you improve, you know. Find what you like and expand on it.
It helps if it's something you like, too. For example, your Tecarian writing is pretty good, even though you don't want to acknowledge that it is.
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