02-12-2016, 08:02 PM
Thanks for the detailed feedback. What is the "three words" exercise you mention?
I've taken classes for graphic art and creative writing, and attended several creative writing conventions. What I don't have is any training in cinematography or voice acting.
I can't really respond to your thoughts on Bloodclaw without spoilers, but you raise some interesting points that may or may not become important if I continue the series past this initial arc. I can say that Bloodclaw is a deviation. He, like Koma, is a "kayo," an Avali sociopath. It translates literally into "severed limb." It interferes with pack formation and carries a huge stigma in Avali culture, moreso than in ours.
I've taken classes for graphic art and creative writing, and attended several creative writing conventions. What I don't have is any training in cinematography or voice acting.
I can't really respond to your thoughts on Bloodclaw without spoilers, but you raise some interesting points that may or may not become important if I continue the series past this initial arc. I can say that Bloodclaw is a deviation. He, like Koma, is a "kayo," an Avali sociopath. It translates literally into "severed limb." It interferes with pack formation and carries a huge stigma in Avali culture, moreso than in ours.