11-05-2016, 08:49 AM
(11-05-2016, 04:51 AM)YDH Wrote:(11-05-2016, 04:46 AM)Lost Rinoah Wrote: I'd say something more subtle and audio cued. And I was saying that it just cuts from black screen in. Suddenly, it's started. Just, boom. Every episode needs at least a slight curve. Starting at 11, or starting mid-scene feels. Disconnected from reality. Couldn't think of what else to say there. But it should start at 0 and go up from there every time gradually. Jumping from "Silence as video starts" to a character thinking about blowing up everything. Or to two characters standing in a room. If you aren't binge-watching, it feels slightly disjointed.Hmm, sort of like how the post-credits Mengele scene starts?
In any case. Starting with a silent fade in after an audio cue and a simple opening credit and title artwork. stuff as simple as that. The episodes are so quiet, which makes any of the first words said, sound overly loud and harsh. Atmospheric and/or white noise would add a lot. And help with the abrupt enter stage left/right/center. As well as allowing you to add a tone to situations you wish to adjust. Hopefully at least some of what i'm saying makes sense. Today is apparently a day of disjointedness for me.
Yes, actually. Something as simple as that. Starting slow and then speeding up to the rate you want it set at.
Also to dipdoo: The entrance thing actually is quite critical. A lot of folks would instantly be put off and stop watching. Meaning you lose out on potential views, feedback, and advertising. And not by a small margin either. If I didn't know better I would have stopped watching the moment any of these episodes started. It's the sort of uncomfortable associated with waking up hanging upside down suspended by your feet. Suden, unpleasent, and it skips all sense of progression. But I'm willing to forgo the unpleasentness for the sake of clean critique. After all. I will not take a pass at Yellow. I serve only to help if I can.
Although, I am happy to see you've worked a cleaner transition between different scenes, forgot to bring that one up since I've spoken with you on it in the past Yellow.