09-22-2015, 09:48 PM
(09-22-2015, 09:15 PM)SilverOtter Wrote:(09-22-2015, 07:20 PM)Corosar Wrote: I did state that the Transformation device change (Yol not being in this time as she was destructively overpowered) it would force Coro into a single form so transformation is simply there as an explaination to why she is an avali.
soul abilities have the major downfall compared to Psi as to cause not only mental drain like Psi but also physical and soul relaxed injuries. I planned that she technically does not have Psi abilities though these soul abilities could be considered similar to low-mid Psi as their effects are similar. sadly... though is the fact its part of Coro's character and how i established her as. in fact compared to the original form (pre-RP) she was far more overpowered and i knew it. I also will not have her using the ability to revive others nor will i have her controlling minds as i find both overpowered in both soul abilities and Psionics. all i planned to do was allow her the ability to read weak willed minds and explore dreams of others. also i thought for sure that you were going to allow for reapers in this version. also if you feel the soul shield is too large of an advantage i am willing to part with it... though i will state she is gonna be intensely vulnerable to Psionic attacks from almost anyone because of the lack of it. however i do wish to retain her memory recovery. I was hoping that if there were reapers still in this world it would put alot of pressure onto Coro to even be able to use these abilities taking her focus away from other things... so there is no way she could use them in combat situations.
Short version of soul section: Removal of dealing with dead souls having to do with moving them. Removal of mind manipulation. Removal of soul shield. Retaining mind reading though lessened to weak beings. Retaining of mind repair from manipulation over time. Retaining ability to see other's souls at a short range (Ie. 10 feet) as that has little effect. is that approved of. also quick question... you stated the merging of the ethereal and physical planes as ghosts and such are still in... would that not technically already be considered part of the universe then? No Psionics at all in place of being able to see spirits and souls having slight control over them.
her abyss abilities are not in play as she can't use her natural form and they only come into play when she is in the form.
I am fully okay with frozen Ryujinnian Avali's for myself as i plan to maintain to his lore on avali biology at least.
if you have anything wrong with above and things needed to be explained further or tweeked please just say ... i am trying to maintain what i enjoy but still remain fair to others.
First tweak, as I understand it: the transformation is permanent. You are Avali. Or better explaination: it's the body the Ministry of Life gave you for this. Either way, no dragon here.
Second tweak is that you need a reason to be in the mortal world. My suggestion is that you are a recon, as odd recounts from recent souls (by recent I mean 30 years) means they need someone out there who can materialize for longer than two minutes to fgure out what the mortals did this time.
Third tweak: the Underworld considers physical reapers a liability. Say anything about the afterlife, and a hired demon will forcefully drag you back through faster than you can say "the Court". If a group of mortals absolutely, definitely needs to know, be prepared to untangle the red tape that makes up the Underworld legal system.
You can be as much of a rookie or master reaper as you like, depending on where in the scale of experience you think would be more fun to play.
First tweak works just fine as i planned for that originally. she can have her transformation device left behind in her homeworld to prevent it from arising in the future.
Second tweak .... may i suggest being dragged in from her homeworld and made to take a form that fits the locals... i find that is alright. she is a physical reaper in her homeworld. perhaps conscripted from that world to work in this one due to above reason... would that not work?
Third tweak is similar to my reasons as to why coro would not interfere just instead of being regulated she can't say what she really is... that works fine for me.
I still feel being more of a rookie and this being more of a trial to show worth would work for this reasoning. investigation of whats going on works perfectly for me.