10-24-2015, 08:34 PM
(10-23-2015, 04:18 PM)SilverOtter Wrote: Among the problems:
Avali biology here doesn't reject the materials used in their prosthetics, and the Avali are masters at prosthetics anyways. Actually, it seems you missed most of the posts I did on their canon, but they did get buried quickly.
You mention Starbound metals at multiple points. That's okay, because I've barely listed what metals we do have.
This is also over the amount of information needed. You did a lot of work on it, but it's partially impenetrable.
Lastly, the name doesn't fit, as Avali names are majorly vowels with patterns. Yes this is from the original canon.
It's not material rejection. It's your body trying to heal over the wound and get rid of the nerve endings. Also physical movement of metals still causes rubbing and rashes. Which in turn causes inflammation, and through this, pain. You really think he can afford the highest quality of cybernetics? These things are pointed out only partially in the character sheet. The wrist moves far too much. Should I have put more information medically?
The metals are placeholders anyways for exactly that reason. I just used something at least slightly comparable to give an idea.
I don't, quite know what you mean by impenetrable quite exactly? Once you have a moment would you be able to be more broad, reword that, or sommat? Do you mean by that exactly what some of the other people are saying about what you're trying to do for their benefit?
He has lived amongst humans and avian and other races. Away from the fleets. I was gonna go for him having been assigned to a sociologist sent from the Avali as their atache. Taken another name so he could actually have other races even say his name. And yet still they couldn't pronounce it. Will input birth-name too then once I decide upon one.
Everything is always a work in progress.
Pirates would rather not kill if at all possible. They just steal and are free. Killing gets the law/interested-groups on your ass a LOT faster and harsher than stealing.
Also. Three months ago I joined an imperial guard squad (Warhammer 40K) that had taken down an entire column of baneblades (holy shit an entire column? How many? 8. with a squad of 6 people.) Afterwards killed an eldritch horror in melee. Survived. GM hated everyone. And on my first session he already hated me too because his sniper that was supposed to kill me had to roll for a 4 or less to hit me. Out of 100.
People can still break rigid systems and have hella fun with it.