11-06-2015, 02:44 AM
(11-06-2015, 02:37 AM)Umbra Wrote:(11-06-2015, 02:22 AM)Corosar Wrote: // Hmm so much for that paragraph i wrote
Slowly her shep slipped out of the wormhole. The design on it showed an emphysis on crystaline structure though it was black with a red glow to it. The structure of her vessel looked sturdy however it showed the wear and tear of the trip she had taken across the galaxy. she quickly began to get a look around as the wormhole slowly closed behind her shep courious about what was here. she slowly began to make an approach to the local planet and the station nearby it. her systems could not get a designation however the large writing on the side of it clearified that issue. she quickly input the station's name in her sensor computer and approached causiously making sure that her weapons remained offline to show how little she meant hostilities.
"okay then.... U.P.C.S Eden... i wonder what that acronym is for... hmmm.."
she slowly reached to her communications systems and began to attempt to hail the station to request permissions to land on the local planet.
" This is Corosar. A civilian wisheng to land on the local planet known as Nexus-17 Please respond. I repeat this is Corosar requesting permission to pass."
// aaa sorry I didn't know how to respond ; A;
Return of grouchy permission man.
"Go ahead."
"much obliged sir thank you very much!"
she began to move to make her approach to the planet quickly working on trying to get the atmospheric thrusters ready to fire. she had not needed to land on a planet for awhile but has had the practice so she was not too worried. her systems did warn her as she approached that her normal thrusters were not gonna be able to help much once in the atmosphere and must use liquid hydrogen thrusters to leave the planet. she quickly shut down the warnings and proceeded. As she entered the atmosphere she began to switch her thrusters from fusion pulse to her hydrogen systems. There was an audible thunk as her shep cycled over to the fuel source. she began to look for a good landing spot as she entered the atmosphere.
(11-06-2015, 02:42 AM)Marxon Wrote:// its a word that came into existence during the 19th century its being fought to be made into an offical word however quite a few places recognize it. her is the Gender neutral version of Him or Her. I use it in this case as Coro is both male and female meaning that both him and her don't properly fit. my search for a better term showed her as one of the options for doing so. she still identifies closer to female as do I. If it bothers too many people i will revert to she instead.(11-06-2015, 02:33 AM)Corosar Wrote: //actually.. i am spelling hir correctly. I finally found the proper spelling for her gender. though its easy to think its wrong.. and thank you for the welcome!~// her does not appear on any well established dictionary, please explain...