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(05-24-2015, 01:12 PM)Gonzogonz Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 01:08 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]//on the outer most layer of an atom is a small particle called a mru particle. Mru stands for magical radiation unit. Let's try to get the meaning of those words. There is nothing to say about the fact, but what about other worlds?  Why is it radiation?
Because It behaves like particles! it radiates from everything, some times doing bad things, but in general it does nothing for non-living stuff and living creatures have protection against it!
Why is it magic then? Because it can, if it's central point of rotation changes, it can transform one element into another! This particles seem to group with eachother, or atleast on the rotation speed and relative rotation point. This effect is called MRU Field. Basically if there are particles with odd rotation, they can set the rotation speed of particles to their speed. As you can geuss, it can lead to disaster.
// part 2


He's so secretive too
It's like he's hiding something.

*is standing not too far behind you, a larger Golem behind him carrying a large chunk of rock*
and what is that supposed to mean?

Nothing important
What are you planning to do with that rock?
(05-24-2015, 02:17 PM)Gonzogonz Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 01:55 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]- snip -

// this... is way too complex. i don't understand half of all you said, and i see no way to use what i understood in any applicable way. all i gathered is that it's some particle thing to do with some form of radiation that can be corrupted. and, when explaining things, be sure to double check for spelling errors.

// Joey's literary style has a lot in common with Revelations in the bible  Angel
(05-24-2015, 11:58 AM)What Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 08:49 AM)Gonzogonz Wrote: [ -> ]*Gonzo has a few golem's put a massive speherical gemstone, twice the size of a beachball, into a sort of totem-like structure. The totem seems to mostly be made of a solid log of Silverwood, though periodically there is a colorful gem jutting out like a spike. The totem is adorned with purpleish and golden metal bands and plates. It's faceted into the ground on a large slab of stone. The gem is a white with faint yellow swirling around inside*
Now I won't have anyone interfering. Good good...
*along the edge of his plot is a stone gate with a door, large enough for a human to pass though, at the bottom of the door is a tiny hatch, fit for things about half the size of an Avali. The gate is made of stone, with large clusters of the crystalline primal aspects, the door itself is made of dark wood with purpleish metal reinforcements*

*sits down one the poroperty Line with a small potted purpl plant and something that resembles a bird bath*
I'm starting to question gonzos sanity


//first of all, as we all know that everything consists of so call "molecules". And thoes molecules are created from a bunch of even smaller particles atoms. Atoms are not even the smallest objects. They are made of electrons neutrons and protons. The atom represents A tiny solar system, it has a core created from neutrons and protons and electrons rotate around in some form of layers. And this is not its final form! It can be divided into even smaller objects.

//part one
// to be resumed, and yes, this does have to do something with magic

(05-24-2015, 01:08 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]//on the outer most layer of an atom is a small particle called a mru particle. Mru stands for magical radiation unit. Let's try to get the meaning of those words. There is nothing to say about the fact, but what about other worlds?  Why is it radiation?
Because It behaves like particles! it radiates from everything, some times doing bad things, but in general it does nothing for non-living stuff and living creatures have protection against it!
Why is it magic then? Because it can, if it's central point of rotation changes, it can transform one element into another! This particles seem to group with eachother, or atleast on the rotation speed and relative rotation point. This effect is called MRU Field. Basically if there are particles with odd rotation, they can set the rotation speed of particles to their speed. As you can geuss, it can lead to disaster.
// part 2

(05-24-2015, 02:17 PM)Gonzogonz Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 01:55 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]//thankfully, the MRU found in this world is pretty much 100% balanced. It means that it cannot harm anything and will not change the matter around itself. As you can geuss the rotation speed is so called balance of the mru. If the particles rotate too slow or too fast it changes its central point of rotation, and can start harming everything around it. Sometimes if too much unstable mru leaks out into the world, the so called mru Feild becomes a little bit more global. They start creating MRUCU or magical radiation unit concertrated unit. Lots of units there. Usually mrucus will get their feild shifted to one side or the other. There is another problem, you simply can't see the MRUCUs!. However you can hear MRUCUs. They make a little noise that you can hear if you listen carefuly. If a MRUCU gets too large it will begin to corrupt the world around it.
The first stage is the noise
Then it begins to slowly corrupt near by objects
Then it will begin to shoot corrupted matter out of its core, spreading the corruption to a wider range
By this point it's too late
The rate of corruption increases rapidly and begins to rip atoms apart in its core.
Then the sky will go dark and the enegry inside the MRUCU will make it be struck with lighting
At this point it is visable.
Then the the Lightning strikes are constant on the MRUCU and the final countdown begins
When at maximum MRU it will explode releasing an abserd amount of enegry

// this... is way too complex. i don't understand half of all you said, and i see no way to use what i understood in any applicable way. all i gathered is that it's some particle thing to do with some form of radiation that can be corrupted. and, when explaining things, be sure to double check for spelling errors.

// here's all the parts. If this doesn't work I might just stick with the botania logic
(05-24-2015, 02:22 PM)Ryuujin Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 02:17 PM)Gonzogonz Wrote: [ -> ]// this... is way too complex. i don't understand half of all you said, and i see no way to use what i understood in any applicable way. all i gathered is that it's some particle thing to do with some form of radiation that can be corrupted. and, when explaining things, be sure to double check for spelling errors.

// Joey's literary style has a lot in common with Revelations in the bible  Angel

// best use of angle emoji. and yes, it sort of has.
(05-24-2015, 01:11 PM)Penguin Wrote: [ -> ]Baaah.. still nobody.

We need to wait i guess. They gotta wake up.

All right..

...
I'm still here
(05-24-2015, 02:25 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 11:58 AM)What Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]*sits down one the poroperty Line with a small potted purpl plant and something that resembles a bird bath*
I'm starting to question gonzos sanity


//first of all, as we all know that everything consists of so call "molecules". And thoes molecules are created from a bunch of even smaller particles atoms. Atoms are not even the smallest objects. They are made of electrons neutrons and protons. The atom represents A tiny solar system, it has a core created from neutrons and protons and electrons rotate around in some form of layers. And this is not its final form! It can be divided into even smaller objects.

//part one
// to be resumed, and yes, this does have to do something with magic

(05-24-2015, 01:08 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]//on the outer most layer of an atom is a small particle called a mru particle. Mru stands for magical radiation unit. Let's try to get the meaning of those words. There is nothing to say about the fact, but what about other worlds?  Why is it radiation?
Because It behaves like particles! it radiates from everything, some times doing bad things, but in general it does nothing for non-living stuff and living creatures have protection against it!
Why is it magic then? Because it can, if it's central point of rotation changes, it can transform one element into another! This particles seem to group with eachother, or atleast on the rotation speed and relative rotation point. This effect is called MRU Field. Basically if there are particles with odd rotation, they can set the rotation speed of particles to their speed. As you can geuss, it can lead to disaster.
// part 2

(05-24-2015, 02:17 PM)Gonzogonz Wrote: [ -> ]// this... is way too complex. i don't understand half of all you said, and i see no way to use what i understood in any applicable way. all i gathered is that it's some particle thing to do with some form of radiation that can be corrupted. and, when explaining things, be sure to double check for spelling errors.

// here's all the parts. If this doesn't work I might just stick with the botania logic

// i don't even know the botania lore, and i don't think too many others do.
(05-24-2015, 02:37 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 01:11 PM)Penguin Wrote: [ -> ]Baaah.. still nobody.

We need to wait i guess. They gotta wake up.

All right..

...
I'm still here

*On closer inspection, he has blonde long hair and pointy ears. his eyes are green and seem to have a green glow.*

Uh.. who are you?


I dunno.

You want to kill him?

Naah.. thats just too cruel.
(05-24-2015, 02:44 PM)Gonzogonz Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 02:25 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]// here's all the parts. If this doesn't work I might just stick with the botania logic

// i don't even know the botania lore, and i don't think too many others do.
//and back to the drawing board. Do you have any suggestion before I go scrap this one?

(05-24-2015, 02:44 PM)Gonzogonz Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 02:25 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]// here's all the parts. If this doesn't work I might just stick with the botania logic

// i don't even know the botania lore, and i don't think too many others do.
//and back to the drawing board. Do you have any suggestion before I go scrap this one?
Baah.. there are more people around here.. aren't there?

Yeah there are.. give them time.

All right.

I wonder what kinds of things there are here..
(05-24-2015, 02:46 PM)Penguin Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 02:37 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]...
I'm still here

*On closer inspection, he has blonde long hair and pointy ears. his eyes are green and seem to have a green glow.*

Uh.. who are you?


I dunno.

You want to kill him?

Naah.. thats just too cruel.
...
The names delta.
I was penguins butler at one point
(05-24-2015, 02:54 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 02:46 PM)Penguin Wrote: [ -> ]*On closer inspection, he has blonde long hair and pointy ears. his eyes are green and seem to have a green glow.*

Uh.. who are you?


I dunno.

You want to kill him?

Naah.. thats just too cruel.
...
The names delta.
I was penguins butler at one point

..How the fuck.. what?

Are you still my butler..?

You have a butler? Or.. had..?

Christ man..
Danu's house was filling the village with a most wonderful smell on this fine morning, the young woman who lived there making a large breakfast for herself and anyone who asked for some.

All of the lights inside were on, giving a warm comforting glow to the stone cottage and the great tree beside it.
*The white-scaled Gunn stumbles out of Jacob's Lab, clutching a mug of hot cocoa in one of his claws and wearing a large bathrobe, dark circles under his eyes.*
Mornin'...that Jacob's gone nuts again over some new project, kept me up almost all night...ugh...
Christ.. i'm so hungry.

Why did you have to eat our only damn snack?


Because you know me.

I'm hungry.

Always hungry.

You.. i..

God damn it.

Where the fuck is our home?

You promised me that we would find one quickly.


I'M SORRY!
(05-24-2015, 02:51 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 02:44 PM)Gonzogonz Wrote: [ -> ]// i don't even know the botania lore, and i don't think too many others do.
//and back to the drawing board. Do you have any suggestion before I go scrap this one?

(05-24-2015, 02:44 PM)Gonzogonz Wrote: [ -> ]// i don't even know the botania lore, and i don't think too many others do.
//and back to the drawing board. Do you have any suggestion before I go scrap this one?

// hmm... not sure... there is not too many rune-related things... though that's very vague and doesn't help much. sorry.
(05-24-2015, 03:02 PM)OdinYggd Wrote: [ -> ]Danu's house was filling the village with a most wonderful smell on this fine morning, the young woman who lived there making a large breakfast for herself and anyone who asked for some.

All of the lights inside were on, giving a warm comforting glow to the stone cottage and the great tree beside it.

*having told the golem to return the rock chunk, he follows the smell over to Danu's cottage*
mmhm... whatever that is, it smells good.
*knocks on the door with his right hand, making metallic noises doing it*
(05-24-2015, 03:02 PM)OdinYggd Wrote: [ -> ]Danu's house was filling the village with a most wonderful smell on this fine morning, the young woman who lived there making a large breakfast for herself and anyone who asked for some.

All of the lights inside were on, giving a warm comforting glow to the stone cottage and the great tree beside it.

...Hmm...looks good in there...
*He takes a sip from the mug of hot cocoa.*
(05-24-2015, 02:55 PM)Penguin Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 02:54 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]...
The names delta.
I was penguins butler at one point

..How the fuck.. what?

Are you still my butler..?

You have a butler? Or.. had..?

Christ man..
I geuss so. That's my only purpose
Course, nobody is willing to show us the way.

My addiction is going to get us killed.


Y..you mean only you?

No. Plenty of ways it could kill you to.

Fuck me.

I barely remember this place.

Guess we're just lost.

(05-24-2015, 03:12 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 02:55 PM)Penguin Wrote: [ -> ]..How the fuck.. what?

Are you still my butler..?

You have a butler? Or.. had..?

Christ man..
I geuss so. That's my only purpose

All right.

Tea, please. For both of us.

I'll have some fish with that..

If i could just get some buttered toast i'd be happy.
(05-24-2015, 03:02 PM)OdinYggd Wrote: [ -> ]Danu's house was filling the village with a most wonderful smell on this fine morning, the young woman who lived there making a large breakfast for herself and anyone who asked for some.

All of the lights inside were on, giving a warm comforting glow to the stone cottage and the great tree beside it.

*you hear a light knocking on the door*

(05-24-2015, 03:13 PM)Penguin Wrote: [ -> ]Course, nobody is willing to show us the way.

My addiction is going to get us killed.


Y..you mean only you?

No. Plenty of ways it could kill you to.

Fuck me.

I barely remember this place.

Guess we're just lost.


(05-24-2015, 03:12 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]I geuss so. That's my only purpose

All right.

Tea, please. For both of us.

I'll have some fish with that..

If i could just get some buttered toast i'd be happy.
Would you like your fish sautéed or pan fried?
(05-24-2015, 03:16 PM)Joeythomas Wrote: [ -> ]
(05-24-2015, 03:02 PM)OdinYggd Wrote: [ -> ]Danu's house was filling the village with a most wonderful smell on this fine morning, the young woman who lived there making a large breakfast for herself and anyone who asked for some.

All of the lights inside were on, giving a warm comforting glow to the stone cottage and the great tree beside it.

*you hear a light knocking on the door*

*looks over*
hm? oh, you're here too.
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